by Sylvie Brubaker
Oh I LOVE this one, so well-written
Lovely poem Sylvie! I enjoyed reading this one again ;)
No, no -- I think it REALLY evokes "deep heaven" from That Hideous Strength. But in both cases, you're enfleshing the reality of Christ's triumph over sin and death.
This reminds me of The Last Battle -- it has strong "further up and further in" vibes! It's triumphant and well done.
Ohh, this is so beautiful. All the imagery - it's so lovely and exhilarating.
Oh I LOVE this one, so well-written
Lovely poem Sylvie! I enjoyed reading this one again ;)
No, no -- I think it REALLY evokes "deep heaven" from That Hideous Strength. But in both cases, you're enfleshing the reality of Christ's triumph over sin and death.
This reminds me of The Last Battle -- it has strong "further up and further in" vibes! It's triumphant and well done.
Ohh, this is so beautiful. All the imagery - it's so lovely and exhilarating.